· Go a little deeper. For critical thinking you are challenged to develop some unique and/or novel understanding. Go somewhere different. Create. Think outside the box. For your next submission, before you organize or write anything, determine the focus of your personal critical thinking. What exactly and specifically will you develop that is unique? From this beginning, expand and build a new avenue of understanding. You introduced the notion of trauma being a form of impaired attachment or severe interruption in attachment bonding which is good. This area deserves further development and exploration.
· Well organized, logical and cohesive. You are commended for getting into some additional research and for considering a good area for critical thinking. 300 words ….. just add more information to what i have written.