Question 1
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
The carefully orchestrated invasion was essential to the defeat of Hitler.
The carefully orchestrated invasion to defeat Hitler.
Since the carefully orchestrated invasion was essential to the defeat of Hitler.
No revision is necessary.
Question 2
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
The Supreme Allied Commander was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. He was later to become president of the United States.
The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower, later became president of the United States.
Both revisions are acceptable.
No revision is necessary.
Question 3
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
Since the invasion took place on June 6, 1944.
That the invasion took place on June 6, 1944.
After, the invasion took place on June 6, 1944.
No revision is necessary.
Question 4
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
The weather was so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day.
The weather was so terrible that the invasion delayed for a full day.
Both revisions are acceptable.
No revision is necessary.
Question 5
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
American troops landing on Utah Beach while encountering only mild resistance at first.
American troops landing on Utah Beach encountered only mild resistance at first.
While American troops landing on Utah Beach encountered only mild resistance at first.
No revision is necessary.
Question 6
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
Whereas, the landing at Omaha Beach was much more treacherous.
While, the landing at Omaha Beach was much more treacherous.
In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach was much more treacherous.
No revision is necessary.
Question 7
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
While other Allied forces included the British and the Canadians.
Other Allied forces included the British and the Canadians.
Other Allied forces besides the British and the Canadians.
No revision is necessary.
Question 8
The paragraph contains several sentence fragments. Decide if the selection in bold needs to be revised or if it is correct as is.
One of the most complex military maneuvers of all time was the Allied invasion of Europe by way of the Normandy beaches of northern France. The carefully orchestrated invasion essential to the defeat of Hitler. The Supreme Allied Commander, who was General Dwight D. Eisenhower. Later to become president of the United States. The invasion took place on June 6, 1944. The weather so terrible that the invasion was delayed for a full day. American troops landing on Utah Beach. Encountered only mild resistance at first. In contrast, the landing at Omaha Beach much more treacherous. The coast itself was extremely dangerous, the landing took place too far offshore, and the Germans had double the forces at this site. Other Allied forces the British and the Canadians. Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British in Normandy. In Arromanches, the Arromanches 360° and Landing Museum commemorate D-Day. With a video of the invasion and France today surrounding the spectators.
Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the selection in bold?
Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British located in Normandy.
Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British found in Normandy.
Military cemeteries for the fallen Americans, Canadians, and British are now located in Normandy.
No revision is necessary.